Saturday, 29 August 2015

Creative Aliens...

We have been writing about our aliens, using an element of description to hook our reader into visualising our friends!  We hope you enjoy our alien descriptions...


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Alien Descriptive Writing

ALIEN Blue slip




My alien is light blue   .  His name is Blue Slip.  

blue slip has leathery skin like a cow.    Has big eyes like a ball of coal,and he is bald.  His head is bigger than his body .

He lives in the snow.  He speaks ‘bam,bow,bam’.   Blue Slip sleeps at night and is out in the day.   

His bite is venomous, like a snake.  he moves quickly like a cheater .

This is my alien Blue Slip!



Alien's About

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The Globber brothers.
 They can be lots of different colours like yellow ,orange and blue. They have big eyes and they have big teeth too.

They speak Globerdy Glob and they live on planet Goobey and jump to travel around the planet. They sleep in craters on planet Gooby.

Those are what the Globber brothers!



Midnight Blue
My Alien Is...

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Adorably cute with
fluffy and fuzzy fur covering it’s smooth skin.     His fur is as soft as a blanket.   Also his body is shaped like a jaffa.

A blood-red mouth planted closely to his wide, blue chin.  When he talks, he talks so sweetly you want to hug him forever.  Eyes that are the lightest shades of pink and as big as diamonds.    

When he walks, he does not walk he actually shuffles, curiously.   Arms and legs as square-shaped and soft as a marshmallows.      

Flower Fields surround his petal home.    A non-nocturnal animal he is.     

Midnight Blue Is His Name!

ALIENS
     
Green gooey face, but with white milk teeth. Black glasses to cover his amazing gold eyes.

Round as a bouncy ball. Teeth with golden rings, but white inside. When he takes his glasses off it shines so bright that it glows up the whole galaxy even people on earth can see it. His antennas are as tall  as the eiffel tower. He speaks holeydooley and it can understand Jamkon.

The alien can go yellow if he’s lying and he will go red if he’s angry. He has three eyes but one is black so you
can't see it because of his glasses.

My name is Oh. I have found a gorg super chip. It is green and black. It looks very electrical. The gorg super chip has about 5 triangles Where was I?, oh yes! I am purple. The purple looks a bit slimy. I also have very curly ears. They look like a purple whirlpool. I have big and round blue eyes.I have utra big white teeth. They’re also wide. I have a purple and blue singlet. My singlet has a purple swirl. I’m stuck in a bush. I look about 1   meter.Sometimes I am very silly. I speak very excited all the time. I also speak Chinese and English. Sometimes I think things what is different on earth.(I come from a different planet so I don’t know much about earth’s things) When I walk I drag my feet behind me. I always walk fast or turbo fast. I have got millions of legs. Their about 40 cm. The legs look very wonky. I live in a saffir spaceship what circles the earth.(like the moon) It is very safe. The problem is that I don’t have toes. Did you know that i’m staring at you with my big blue eyes?

THE END   BY OSCAR





T3:W5/6
Alien Description:
My alien has white shiny eyes with blue crystal like pupils.  He is as fuzzy as a warm fuzzy blanket. My alien is as purple as plums.  He lives on planet Zorp which is in another universe. His name is Gobbly Goo.  Gobbly Goo smells like the freshest plums ever.  His mouth is as red as red apples.

When he walks his feet start wiggling and he just jumps around everywhere.  He is always very happy and cheerful.  His cute face is hard to resist.

This is my alien.

By Tyler Brown 2015


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These are the globber brothers the little one is piggy the medium one is bob, and the the big one is Jimmy.  They live on the planet Dooleyholey and they talk google talk.  They do a fast type of wobble to get around .

Now lets talk about Jimmy .Jimmy Is blue and has one eye bigger than the other.  his eyes are as big as wrecking balls.  Jimmy  is elastically rubbery, so he is so flexible.  His face is his body,and his legs are very short and so are his arms.  Thats it for Jimmy.

Bob is orange, always bored and neutral faced.  One of his eyes are sloped.His face is also his body.His arms and legs are as short as ants.Thats it for Bob.

Piggy is the smallest one nothing’s wrong  with his eyes.He’s always happy and has four teeth on the top of his mouth and five on the bottom.Thats it for piggy.

Those were the globber brothers…! THE END!


Alien Descriptive Writing:

  2.      jelly belly !

Jelly belly is a little bright green jelly with little slimy holes all around him.  Jelly belly is so cute, you would just want to hug him to death and he would hug you back. But you wouldn’t know because he’s a small ball with no arms.

Jelly belly has little cute eyes has no hair and no legs because he's a little ball of jelly.  

Jelly belly jumps to walk.   His sound is like ‘be bo be bo’ to say hi in his language.   He sleeps half a night and half a day.  Jelly belly lives under a bed.                                  




Alien Description
W5 / 6
My blue alien has three big , eyes at the top of it’s three antennas.  It has wide short arms and legs with no fingers or toes. It has a swollen  mouth ,and out of it comes a thin pink tongue.  

When it sees something scary it’s  tongue fizzes up with clear bubbles ,and it makes a tiny slow roaring sound or a quick echoing howl  to scare the scary creature  away.  

I will name it blue . . . ish.


T3 Week 5/6   
Alien Description   

My alien can climb up a steep wall and looks like a red slimey alien.   My alien Is climbing up his step ramp, his babies can to.  they can climb up side down.  The baby alien is 30 time smaller than the adult alien.  The baby is the  exact same to the adult alien.

His eye are in it’s antennae on his face.  He wants to get his eyes in his face like how we have our eyes in our face. His legs are tiny.  His arms are wiggling.  My alien has two teeth they are extremely sharp.


T3 W5/6
My Alien Description
By MatthewJ
My alien has three googly eyes and a boulder like body.  He has two light blue feet.  He also has a long flappy tail.  My alien has a big mouth with blunt teeth because he is a herbivore.  He is a light green with dark green spots.   He is an alien that can only talk in Spanish.  He lives on planet called Spainear.  This is my alien it is as small as a mouse.


Alien Writing

    Fluff Ball

what it looks like

Fluff ball is fluffy and it is lit  purple
and fuzzy.   It is a girl.  


how it moves

Fluff ball moves by rolling
on the floor, she rolls fast and slow.



what it sounds like

Fluff ball sounds like ‘me me
me me me’.



if it comes out at night/day

fluff ball comes out at night time.
To look for its prey and in day time she looks for
a place dark to sleep.




does it have body parts or not


fluff ball has no body parts
it only has a mouth and eyes
and a body. You might not see
her mouth but she does have
one it just sinks into
its fuzzy fluff.


where does it live

Fluff ball lives in a flower field.


Fluff ball is her name, not a lame name!




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Nice Alien  Mad Alien
4/5
My alien is...
My aliens  is furry and cute and adorable . His eyes are as big as marshmallows.  .  his fur as soft as silk.  Blue skin as blue as the sea. He is so  bouncy.    he was mad as a parent  when we didn't  do what we were supposed to do. happy guy  was so happy and he was never sad or mad. He lives in the wild on planet strip.  Mad alien was so mad. he sleeps during  the day.  he slips down when he walks.


Angry Alien
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My  alien looks  angry because he has a red face,  like an alien with a bad hair day.   he is red as a volcano.  He is a midget alien with jeans and black shoes.  He smells like he burnt hair.   He looks swag because he has awesome jeans.  He lives in your head because when you get happy he gets happy to. He sounds like any human.   He walks like a human.   I will never leave you, he says.


week 4 / 5:
The alien by  Trent day
Sillyster is an alien that is silly to everyone.  He is an alien that comes to Earth twice a year. He is green like a crocodile. He is soft like a fury cat. His language is called riltreish, he speaks like glu ghr gh fey. He  is my best friend.
He is clumsy as an out of control car.  He is grumpy when ice cream is on his head. He scribbles on paper every time he come. His planet is called moswat He points where stuff is but it is actually  behind him. He sneaks up on chips, he loves chips.
He says ‘I don’t know’,when stuff is in front of him.  Whenever he comes he says ‘Hi Tent’ but my real name is Trent



Aliens
He has big teeth, black eyes with a spot in the center so he can see. His name is Alienzilla!   He lives in a ufo. He sleeps at day so look out for him at night he eats people and Bob.  


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