Creative Aliens...

We have been writing about our aliens, using an element of description to hook our reader into visualising our friends!  We hope you enjoy our alien descriptions...

Alien Descriptive Writing

ALIEN Blue slip

My alien is light blue   .  His name is Blue Slip.  

blue slip has leathery skin like a cow.    Has big eyes like a ball of coal,and he is bald.  His head is bigger than his body .

He lives in the snow.  He speaks ‘bam,bow,bam’.   Blue Slip sleeps at night and is out in the day.   

His bite is venomous, like a snake.  he moves quickly like a cheater .

This is my alien Blue Slip!

Alien's About

The Globber brothers.

 They can be lots of different colours like yellow ,orange and blue. They have big eyes and they have big teeth too.

They speak Globerdy Glob and they live on planet Goobey and jump to travel around the planet. They sleep in craters on planet Gooby.

Those are what the Globber brothers!

Midnight Blue

My Alien Is...

Adorably cute with

fluffy and fuzzy fur covering it’s smooth skin.     His fur is as soft as a blanket.   Also his body is shaped like a jaffa.

A blood-red mouth planted closely to his wide, blue chin.  When he talks, he talks so sweetly you want to hug him forever.  Eyes that are the lightest shades of pink and as big as diamonds.    

When he walks, he does not walk he actually shuffles, curiously.   Arms and legs as square-shaped and soft as a marshmallows.      

Flower Fields surround his petal home.    A non-nocturnal animal he is.     

Midnight Blue Is His Name!

ALIENS

     

Green gooey face, but with white milk teeth. Black glasses to cover his amazing gold eyes.

Round as a bouncy ball. Teeth with golden rings, but white inside. When he takes his glasses off it shines so bright that it glows up the whole galaxy even people on earth can see it. His antennas are as tall  as the eiffel tower. He speaks holeydooley and it can understand Jamkon.

The alien can go yellow if he’s lying and he will go red if he’s angry. He has three eyes but one is black so you

can't see it because of his glasses.

My name is Oh. I have found a gorg super chip. It is green and black. It looks very electrical. The gorg super chip has about 5 triangles Where was I?, oh yes! I am purple. The purple looks a bit slimy. I also have very curly ears. They look like a purple whirlpool. I have big and round blue eyes.I have utra big white teeth. They’re also wide. I have a purple and blue singlet. My singlet has a purple swirl. I’m stuck in a bush. I look about 1   meter.Sometimes I am very silly. I speak very excited all the time. I also speak Chinese and English. Sometimes I think things what is different on earth.(I come from a different planet so I don’t know much about earth’s things) When I walk I drag my feet behind me. I always walk fast or turbo fast. I have got millions of legs. Their about 40 cm. The legs look very wonky. I live in a saffir spaceship what circles the earth.(like the moon) It is very safe. The problem is that I don’t have toes. Did you know that i’m staring at you with my big blue eyes?

THE END   BY OSCAR

T3:W5/6

Alien Description:

My alien has white shiny eyes with blue crystal like pupils.  He is as fuzzy as a warm fuzzy blanket. My alien is as purple as plums.  He lives on planet Zorp which is in another universe. His name is Gobbly Goo.  Gobbly Goo smells like the freshest plums ever.  His mouth is as red as red apples.

When he walks his feet start wiggling and he just jumps around everywhere.  He is always very happy and cheerful.  His cute face is hard to resist.

This is my alien.

By Tyler Brown 2015

alien brothers are about   

These are the globber brothers the little one is piggy the medium one is bob, and the the big one is Jimmy.  They live on the planet Dooleyholey and they talk google talk.  They do a fast type of wobble to get around .

Now lets talk about Jimmy .Jimmy Is blue and has one eye bigger than the other.  his eyes are as big as wrecking balls.  Jimmy  is elastically rubbery, so he is so flexible.  His face is his body,and his legs are very short and so are his arms.  Thats it for Jimmy.

Bob is orange, always bored and neutral faced.  One of his eyes are sloped.His face is also his body.His arms and legs are as short as ants.Thats it for Bob.

Piggy is the smallest one nothing’s wrong  with his eyes.He’s always happy and has four teeth on the top of his mouth and five on the bottom.Thats it for piggy.

Those were the globber brothers…! THE END!

Alien Descriptive Writing:

  2.      jelly belly !

Jelly belly is a little bright green jelly with little slimy holes all around him.  Jelly belly is so cute, you would just want to hug him to death and he would hug you back. But you wouldn’t know because he’s a small ball with no arms.

Jelly belly has little cute eyes has no hair and no legs because he's a little ball of jelly.  

Jelly belly jumps to walk.   His sound is like ‘be bo be bo’ to say hi in his language.   He sleeps half a night and half a day.  Jelly belly lives under a bed.                                  

Alien Description

W5 / 6

My blue alien has three big , eyes at the top of it’s three antennas.  It has wide short arms and legs with no fingers or toes. It has a swollen  mouth ,and out of it comes a thin pink tongue.  

When it sees something scary it’s  tongue fizzes up with clear bubbles ,and it makes a tiny slow roaring sound or a quick echoing howl  to scare the scary creature  away.  

I will name it blue . . . ish.

T3 Week 5/6   

Alien Description   

My alien can climb up a steep wall and looks like a red slimey alien.   My alien Is climbing up his step ramp, his babies can to.  they can climb up side down.  The baby alien is 30 time smaller than the adult alien.  The baby is the  exact same to the adult alien.

His eye are in it’s antennae on his face.  He wants to get his eyes in his face like how we have our eyes in our face. His legs are tiny.  His arms are wiggling.  My alien has two teeth they are extremely sharp.

T3 W5/6

My Alien Description

By MatthewJ

My alien has three googly eyes and a boulder like body.  He has two light blue feet.  He also has a long flappy tail.  My alien has a big mouth with blunt teeth because he is a herbivore.  He is a light green with dark green spots.   He is an alien that can only talk in Spanish.  He lives on planet called Spainear.  This is my alien it is as small as a mouse.

Alien Writing

    Fluff Ball

what it looks like

Fluff ball is fluffy and it is lit  purple

and fuzzy.   It is a girl.  

how it moves

Fluff ball moves by rolling

on the floor, she rolls fast and slow.

what it sounds like

Fluff ball sounds like ‘me me

me me me’.

if it comes out at night/day

fluff ball comes out at night time.

To look for its prey and in day time she looks for

a place dark to sleep.

does it have body parts or not

fluff ball has no body parts

it only has a mouth and eyes

and a body. You might not see

her mouth but she does have

one it just sinks into

its fuzzy fluff.

where does it live

Fluff ball lives in a flower field.

Fluff ball is her name, not a lame name!

    t

Nice Alien  Mad Alien

4/5

My alien is...

My aliens  is furry and cute and adorable . His eyes are as big as marshmallows.  .  his fur as soft as silk.  Blue skin as blue as the sea. He is so  bouncy.    he was mad as a parent  when we didn't  do what we were supposed to do. happy guy  was so happy and he was never sad or mad. He lives in the wild on planet strip.  Mad alien was so mad. he sleeps during  the day.  he slips down when he walks.

Angry Alien

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My  alien looks  angry because he has a red face,  like an alien with a bad hair day.   he is red as a volcano.  He is a midget alien with jeans and black shoes.  He smells like he burnt hair.   He looks swag because he has awesome jeans.  He lives in your head because when you get happy he gets happy to. He sounds like any human.   He walks like a human.   I will never leave you, he says.

week 4 / 5:

The alien by  Trent day

Sillyster is an alien that is silly to everyone.  He is an alien that comes to Earth twice a year. He is green like a crocodile. He is soft like a fury cat. His language is called riltreish, he speaks like glu ghr gh fey. He  is my best friend.

He is clumsy as an out of control car.  He is grumpy when ice cream is on his head. He scribbles on paper every time he come. His planet is called moswat He points where stuff is but it is actually  behind him. He sneaks up on chips, he loves chips.

He says ‘I don’t know’,when stuff is in front of him.  Whenever he comes he says ‘Hi Tent’ but my real name is Trent

Aliens

He has big teeth, black eyes with a spot in the center so he can see. His name is Alienzilla!   He lives in a ufo. He sleeps at day so look out for him at night he eats people and Bob.  

The Moon!!!

We have been working on our creative writing to add description and hook our readers.  Our topic last week was the moon.  We researched about the moon and watched a video clip of the moon to give us some ideas.   From this we created a piece of writing about the moon to capture our readers attention.  We hope you enjoy them.

THE MOON:  WEEK 3 / 4 Writing

By Celine

The moon story

One awesome spacey day when I went to the moon, as my soft feet lay down on the surface I knew that I was lying down on a bunch of white and pink marshmallows!  I broke off one of the marshmallows and ate it ,since I was hungry.  It kinda tasted like cheese-here’s my favourite secret I don’t actually like some types of cheese.  The marshmallows made me bounce up and down,  each time I landed on the strange cheese tasting marshmallows.

 

Look over there it’s an alien I wonder what it is made of?  Green jelly?  I am going to race to that alien like a speeding race car.  To be honest with you I have never eaten green Jelly!  Well it’s worth a try.  Bouncing, o no it’s getting away!  Come back here you green jelly alien I don’t want you to end up in another rabbit hole. No wait, oww it got away!

Look I can see the sun is it made out of macaroni and cheese ,or yellow ham?  It must feel much more different here than there.  I actually feel like I am on ice-mallows!  And there it must feel like hot steamy cheese!  I wonder if there are ants there that are the enemy to the sun, because they eat the macaroni and cheese.?

Super Moon!!!week 3

Do you Know the story about the Moon and the sun?

Moon,As wide as the universe. But as round as a  bowling ball.  And Sun, as hot as lava, and as red as fresh tomatoes.  Well Sun and Moon are actually a bit of a superhero.

You see, long ago the sun was the biggest superhero of all time, because he shone brightly at day and shone brightly at night.  The town loved him.  But of course the town loved sun so much that they didn’t pay any attention to Moon.

Moon tried to get their attention,Hello,hello!!! But it was no use.  Sun had all the attention and  and did not care enough to share it with Moon.  

I will not give up,said Moon.  As angry as could be.  I should talk to Sun.

 Tell him that he should care more!!!  

“Sun’,Moon said angrily. . .”You get so much attention it’s unfair.”

 I need some attention too.

Well,said sun what do you want me to do about that?

“I want to make a deal.’  Moon said!!!

“What kind of deal?“

Let’s say we take turns.”

“Take turns at what?”asked Sun

“ What about at daytime you come up and shine,and at nighttime the stars and I light up the night sky.

Now there are two superheros said the town!!! YAY!!!  And that’s how Moon took his share.( :   

moon writing

Just looking at the moon it feels

like you're on the moon.

The moon was made 4.6 billion years ago.   Some people think there's a man in the moon

or a rabbit but there isn’t.

There can be a full moon, a new moon and last quarter moon.   There's also a waxing moon. The size of the moon is a quarter. The moon is in space.

People wonder what the holes are. They are

called craters. The moon changes every year

or a month. The moon shines down on you

when you sleeping or camping.

Week 3

The Moon Guy

Once there was a Moon Guy, he was quite a happy one too.  Moon Guy was a round ball that had little arms, little legs and a face.  Scientists believe he was formed over 4.6 billion years ago...wow!!!.  

He has many craters because many mean asteroids have hurt him only because he was different.  The mean asteroids flung themselves towards the Moon Guy and when they hit him, there became holes which were indented into him.

  

Many people think that Moon Guy is made out of cheese, but the truth is that Moon Guy is always scared. He thinks that us humans will try to eat him, even though he is actually made out of rock.

Moon Guy can talk English and is very,very nice.  But sometimes people get intimidated by him because he is so much bigger than humans.   If you ever go and visit Moon Guy in a spaceship don’t be intimidated, and can you also please say hi to him for me.

The End!!!!

By Tyler Brown  2015

DISCOVERING THE

.MOON.

Rocky cliffs with water trickling down them that led into shallow lakes with beautiful fish.  Swaying palm trees, ancient oaks and clusters of bush scattered around the area.  What was this planet?  No one knew.

Shy Water Nymphs, furry Centaurs and many more mythical creatures live there (and fish.)  One cherry morning an army of evil Aliens from planet Blob attacked unnoticed.  The ruler of planet Blob (Floyd Horton) was jealous of how beautiful their planet was and how dreary and drowsy his planet was so they planned to take over the planet Greenstone.

All mythical creatures fled to space in shuttles while the army attacked but collided with the moon.  Never did they figure out how old is was but we humans decided that it was 4.5 billion years old.  (That is probably the correct period of years it has been there).

They had never known he was there because they paid so much attention to the blinding sun.  The moon was a smooth, grey area with a now rocky surface.  It was completely different to there beautiful planet.  When they had catapulted accidentally onto the moon, they had made huge craters.

And that kiddo’s is why the moon has craters.

Madison’s Moon descriptive writing                   

Some moons are shiny and perfect, some  moons are little and a little bit big and some are white moons.

It’s going down the moon is going away. The moon and the stars is always following us.  

There are black clouds at nighttime and the moon is looking at us and the sun is making the moon come back.  The moon is always there at nighttime and the moon is like a light. The moon is inside the black clouds because the moon is white because at nighttime the moon comes up when it’s ready. 

            

moon writing        

Me and xxx are on the Moon, we can see earth.   We can see the moon has a Moon.   the Moon looks shiny and yellow like the Sun.  

There is hard work coming from it  and 66 ufos are flying around it and making it look like Saturn's ring around the moon's moon.  The moon’s moon looks like a big block of cheese!

The ufo I saw is the colour is silver and then glass, I can see the alien in the ufo, he is green and looks slimy.

The Moon really looks like a block of cheese from here. the craters are giant and one of the meteors is still there from where it crashed. by Dylan

My moon story !  W3

As i looked in my scope out the window i saw a bright

yellow moon with little holes called craters.  Craters are made when big comets    

smashed into the moon.

The light on the moon is reflected from the sun, and as i looked closely i see the flags for the people who have landed on it.

I Would really love to go to the moon but i can’t because I have no gear.

My question is, can the rocky full moon change people into werewolves ?

BY TROY !

Week 3 descriptive writing:

                              Moon by felix

  

Wake up!   Wake up!   Get up and get in the space ship, their going take off without you.

 

5.4.3.2.1   Blast off!   Wow!  Look at the galaxy.  Space is so dark, I can hardly see.

When are we there. That asteroid is crashing into the moon.  The craters look like swiss cheese, yuck!!!  

Did you know that the moon controls the tides?

The moon looks so old, it was made 4.5 billion years ago.

The moon is the most white  thing in the universe.!

story 1.

The moon trip!

3  2  1  LIFT OFF!!!  My cheeks wobbled as I  lifted off the surface with Thomas and Jackson at my side.

Flames burst out the the engine as we got higher and higher off the ground!  As we kept going higher we started to see a little glimpse of the moon.  

As we got closer and closer to the moon it got bigger. Then we started slowing down to land on the moon!  

“We have landed” the door opened and we slowly walked on the moon.  

                  Me

Jackson and Thomas got a handful of moon cheese, “this doesn't taste like cheese” we said.

 

We jumped on the moon for hours, then got in the spaceship and blasted back to earth!

By Jacob!

THE MOON ALIEN.

by Trent

once there was an alien that was green and black spotted, he landed on the Moon.  he wanted to live there,  because his planet was rocky too, and he did.

then the apollo 45 took off in 2007. and they said when it took off, 5,4,3,2,1, minus 15 seconds before take off.  12, 11, 10, 9, mission succeeded 6,5,4,3,2,1, lift off we lifted off the ground.

when they got to the moon they saw an alien .the humans were trying to kill him.  then the alien shepherded up a rock and blew up  the bad humans and the half moon was waning more. the alien tried to get to the light side.  

Then the alien planet (Geonosis) came next to the moon. then Geonosis was the second moon. the aliens and the humans were friends and they lived happily ever after.

THE MOON

5 4 3 2 1 lift off!  as I heard  Jacob and Thomas screaming “THIS IS AWESOME”.  

We were expecting to go to jupiter but we went in the wrong direction so we went to the moon. it looks really cool because of all the craters and things shaped like a face.

”I thought the moon was made of cheese” said Thomas.

We all tried to see if it tasted like cheese, it didn’t because it broke  Jacobs teeth.

 

When we traveled around the moon we found a friendly moon alien, it was lost.  it was funny because it could speak english.  The alien said “Hi my name is Swibble.”

Swibble let us look around we found his house it was really awesome because it had lots of asteroid pictures and cool space things. it even had a photo of the first man that landed on the moon.

The moon aliens

                by zack

One day I looked out the window at the moon, there were two aliens on the moon.   they were trying to plant trees on the moon.   So I built a spaceship and went up there.    I  told them they can not plant trees on the moon because of the ammonia.   Ammonia is a type of gas trees cannot grow on gas.

So the next night I went to bed and looked out the window and the two aliens were trying to eat the moon.   So I went up again, I said the moon is not cheese its solid rock with traces of ammonia.   I went to bed again not knowing that they thought the ammonia was diamonds. They blowed up the moon i said to myself, here we go again!

close encounters with the third kind

I shut my eyes, sweat drips down my face, as I feel sick.  The ground shakes.  I look  to my side and see Jacob and Jackson looking as nervous as I am.  

Were sitting on millions of gallons of fuel,if 1 thing goes wrong we die.

We shoot up faster than a bullet.  I see a flash of moon. I start to get excited.  Hours later we’re ready to land.

I exclaim "I see dots of light all across the moon." When our boots hit the ground the dust made a minor explosion on the ground.

”Lets go and See what those lights were”I said

“What lights”Said jackson

“I saw some from the ship”I said

“Well lets see then”says jacob

There were millions of crators that acted like obstacles.

There were moon rocks and dust covering the  whole moon. But we didn’t bring any bags for dust and rocks. We just had bags with our equipment.  

When you look at the moon from the ground it looks white, but it’s actually grey.When we found the light we found an alien, he had a massive head. We became friends with him, and after a while we brang him back to our homes on Earth!

THE END!!!!!!!

by Thomas

week 3 space:going to the moon

I’m in the spaceship and it is counting down

10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1, blast off.

I believe I can fly, I can see it, it's the moon.  It’s a lot bigger in real life “let's land”.

“Wow this is amazing”....“bebaa” “ahhhhhh!”

“who are you?” my name is Blaab.  I’m a tall green guy.

“Run, get in the spaceship, we need to go back to Earth!”

The Man on the Moon.

Once there was a man on the moon.  Most nights the man on the moon went out and went to Earth.  At day he used a rope to pull tides in and out.  Some nights he stayed on the moon to turn people into werewolves.  Some times he made a Full Moon, New Moon, Waxing Crescent and Last quarter.

One night he forgot to turn people into werewolves.  Oh no! said the man on the moon.   “I forgot to turn everyone into werewolves” ! Even wors!   I forgot to do the tides! I  t’s been high-tide all day!   Tomorrow I’m  going to not forget to turn people into werewolves and pull the tides in and out,  And he did.

BY OSCAR

I was on a big moon.   I saw the big  Earth and it was coloured green and blue. The moon was like a cheese because it had big huge holes.   

I heard things that was crashing together and I heard the sun sneeze out the steaming fire.   

I smell things that smell like aliens and then I feel all the rock with my shoes because I pushed my shoes back and forth.  

Then the rocks were moving and I think that the moon is going to shake and it did  shake. I was looking at my friends.  I started running at them, but I couldn't so I keep on running.

This is my favourite part.  I reached to them and they grabbed me and pulled me and and I feel so happy that I was saved by friends.   I said that I will come back to the moon.                              

                   THE END by Lotuga

MOON

Wow!  The moon is so much smaller than Earth.  I’m on the moon right now, it is dark and it’s light.   At the moon there are holes that the asteroids made.  It is really dusty .

The moon controls the sea.  It is really cold up here.  There is a new moon, a full moon and a small moon.  There is all shapes of moons.

At the moon there is no food around.  If you run out of food and water you might die.

If you had a moon board you could go  moon surfing.  I am moon surfing right now.  Moon surfing is fun.

Do you think on the moon right now there are aliens???

THE END.

By KYLE.

Week 3 Writing:

The Moon Alien  

I'm in Apollo 11 it's going  in

15,14,13,12,11,10,9,8,7, 6,5,4,3,2,1,0 blast off!

Mission succeeded.   

Oh no, we are losing gas.  We have to detach the first part of the rocket at the bottom.   

Now We’re at the moon. What's that flying, it's not the rocket?   It looks like a ufo!   It's coming to us   we come in peace!   its landing. The Alien shouted “brothers get the guns and shoot them”

lets go back .   lets go back.  lets go home.   yay that's why people go to the moon. Im going to the beach  because the tide is in.

did you know that the moon is 4,6 b year old and the Moon is small as Mercury?

Space writing:
The moon takes the sun lite from the sun to shine and it control the tides. You can only see

the  moon at night time

MOON STORY,

Wake up I am going to the moon.  Hurry or  you  will  miss it.      

54321 blast off!                               

When you step on the moon, it makes a foot mark.   It is muddy and rocky on the moon. There is no graffiti on the moons  that is why it's  bouncy on the moon and there is no oxygen in space.  

By Sahil